Man on the Edge

In the video there is a man who goes to an hotel. The bellboy go with him to the bedroom but he forgets to give the man the key of the bedroom so he returns but there is anybody on it. The bellboy puts his head out of the window and he sees the man on the edge of the window. He calls to the police who comes very quickly. Then a police tries to persuade him to not jump. Suddenly, a spacecraft appears and the marcians capture the man and take him to their planet.

Solution paragraph by Patricia

Dear Ana,

I think this is a big problem that affects women in the world. My solution is the following, if you know a girl or a woman who probably is having machism by a man, you can talk with her and help her in everything, You should tell her that she call to the police. The man will be under arrest and the girl wiil have a good life.

The problem

My topic for today is the machism. At least one of three women worlwide has suffered throughout her life an act of domestic violence ( rape, abuse, harassment..). But these women are not able to ask for help and there are two reason for that. On the one hand, they are scared of their partners. On the other hand they deffend to their partners because they are in love with them and women say that her husband would never hurt them. Probably there are more reasons but these two are the only thing that occurs to me right now.

Write a comparative/ contrast paragraph

Punk music and Classic music are a  very different kind of music. On the one hand, punk music is more heavy and rude, while classic music is more slow and in my opinion a little bit boring. On the other hand, the clothes, punk people usually wears black or white clothes or they sometimes dye their hair and even they rip the T-shirt and the jeans, however people who likes classic music is elegant because they usually wear suit and tie if is a men and a dress if is a woman. Another different is that punk concerts are usually in stadiums, while an opera is played in a concert hall. Also punk concerts are cheaper than an opera concert. Finally, you can play a punk song in a party and have fun with your friends whithout disturb to your neighbours of course, while if you play an classic song in a party I'm sure that everyone is going to kill you. I think that classic music is used to study or to relaxing.

My opinion paragraph

My topic for today is "Living without a TV". Almost every family has a TV, in fact probably more than one, and people everywhere spend hours watching it. But a few families choose to live without a TV because they think there are advantages. Families spend more time talking to each other or doing more creative things like reading or painting and even they spend more time outdoors. I think this way to live is fine but it's a little bit boring, you have always the same rutine. On the other hand, What happend with the children? I mean, children who don't have TV may feel different from their school friends and often won't know what they are talking about. Also, it is not true that all TV programmes are bad. There are good ones like documentaries and people who live without a TV  may know less about what's happening in the world. On my opinion, although living without TV has some advantages, I think today it's unrealistic and that we should just try to turn the TV off when there's nothing good on. 

Peer response for me by Loreto Beviar Gallego.

 

     Dear Ana, the organization of the ideas is very good, you started step by step. Firstly when you met your best friend and secondly how many yers you know her. In the next step, you talked about her personality and her appearance using very good adjetives. About the content, you give important and specific information and this is essencial to understand what you want to transmit us about your friend. Another point that i would like to tell you is the use of connectors, if you use more connectors you will have a perfect paragraph. Good job Ana! :)

Someone who i admire...

       I'm going to talk about my best friend, Gema. I met her six yers ago when we were 12 years old at the track of athletics because we were in the same team, since then we are best friends. On the one hand, her appearance. She has straight long brown hair, green eyes, big lips, small nose and she's as tallest as me. On the other hand, her personality. She's extrovert, funny sociable, independent and reliable, Also she's sensitive and sometimes a little bit stubborn, it's difficult to change her opinion about something. At the moment, she is studying medicine in Barcelona and I miss her so much but we keep in touch by WhatsApp ans Skype. I love her and I'm sure that she'll be the best neurologist in the world because she works hard and she deserve it. 

Trying to describe what Guernica makes me feel.

           Picasso is representing the Spanish civil war in this painting, which was between 1936-1939 and his end was tragic with the victory of Franco and a lot of deaths. After that everything changed in Spain. So I think that the feelings that Picasso wants to show with his painting are the smell and the despair of the spanish poblation. It's easy see what the painter wants to transmit us and makes me feel sad and pesimist.