Dear Ana, the organization of the ideas is very good, you started step by step. Firstly when you met your best friend and secondly how many yers you know her. In the next step, you talked about her personality and her appearance using very good adjetives. About the content, you give important and specific information and this is essencial to understand what you want to transmit us about your friend. Another point that i would like to tell you is the use of connectors, if you use more connectors you will have a perfect paragraph. Good job Ana! :)
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